America
has come a long way since when the Declaration of Independence and The
Declaration of Sentiments were written. The United States is no longer a colony
of Great Britain and women are now equals of men. However, do people really
have all of their liberties and is everyone really equal?
Questioning
the true independence of American residents brings up the heated debate on the
NSA and Edward Snowden. Was he protecting the American public by leaking information
about government surveillance? Or was he wrong to do so? One could argue that
the government was infringing upon citizens’ rights but the government only
instilled these programs to protect the people from harmful activities, such as
terrorism.
People
are still unequal as well and might always be. Women and men have been unequal
and have held completely separate roles in society since the beginning of time.
Though females can now vote and have many more rights, they still face many
double standards, stereotypes, and biases. Really, people are born unequal;
they have different levels of intellect, different physiques, different social
statuses. Even in the way in which it is determined that people are unequal is
biased, depending on which qualities a person values more.
The
rights listed in both declarations as “inalienable” are extremely idealistic.
Though we can get close to attaining them, we will never be able to fully
achieve them without violating another right, or someone else’s rights.
I completely agree with you! I feel like that falls under the "you can't make everyone happy" rule of life. And you're right, no matter how close we come to perfection, there'll always be one person who thinks we're doing it wrong. Also, I like your structure; I like how it transistions nicely from point to point without getting choppy.
ReplyDeleteI agree. The "inalienable" rights are, indeed, idealistic. I still have yet to see a society in which everyone is treated equal. I guess it only exists in utopian fantasies.
ReplyDeleteI agree too! Everyone is born different, but can people be given equal rights therefore making everyone equal? These rights have not been attained yet and I do completely understand that we will probably never achieve them. I like your style Hannah.
ReplyDeleteHannah, I agree with you. I think that the discrimination is highly present in the workforce as well: it affects who will get the job, as well as who earns that CEO position. I like your use of the rhetorical question: it grabs readers, and is ultimately supported very eloquently. Nice job
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